[Docs] Improve English translation quality and sync with Chinese docs#46
[Docs] Improve English translation quality and sync with Chinese docs#46q404365631 wants to merge 1 commit into
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- Rewrite Loomy introduction (en) to match Chinese version content
- Fix WeChat channel missing from AstronClaw comparison table (en)
- Fix incorrect Weibo command translation ('Connect Lobster' -> '连接龙虾')
- Fix grammar: 'chat softwares' -> 'chat applications'
- Fix grammar: 'these key information' -> 'this key information'
- Improve translations: 'knowledge precipitation' -> 'knowledge retention'
- Improve translations: 'Breakpoint Diagnosis' -> 'Bottleneck Diagnosis'
- Improve translations: 'Hotspot Tracking' -> 'Trend Tracking'
- Improve translations: 'Crawling' -> 'Extraction'
- Improve homepage features descriptions (en)
- Remove unnatural 'currently' from quick-start
- Fix 'Privacy and Security Related' -> 'Privacy and Security'
- Fix 'be easier to play its value' -> 'deliver its value'
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Thanks for the PR — the translation fixes are genuinely valuable, especially catching A few things need to be addressed before this can merge: 1. Please rebase — the PR currently conflicts with This branch predates the upstream docs sync merged on 2026-06-27 (#58), which already fixed some of the same sentences with different wording:
The changes to 2. The fix is correct, but English readers should know what they're sending. Suggest:
3. Comparison table: WeChat addition diverges from the Chinese version Adding WeChat is factually right — the Chinese Everything else LGTM. Happy to merge once the rebase is done. |
Summary
This PR improves the English translation quality of the documentation and syncs it with the Chinese version, as part of the Documentation Update Bounty.
Changes
Content Sync
Translation Quality Fixes
Connect Lobster→连接龙虾)chat softwares→chat applicationsthese key information→this key informationknowledge precipitation→knowledge retentionBreakpoint Diagnosis→Bottleneck DiagnosisHotspot Tracking→Trend TrackingProduct Information Crawling→Product Information ExtractionPrivacy and Security Related→Privacy and Securitybe easier to play its value→deliver its valuecurrentlyfrom quick-startTesting
Related: #17